苏延奇新概念英语第二册

新概念英语第4册写作常见技巧：高分作文一点即通

27. 高分作文一点即通

一篇佳作不仅是写作素材的最好来源，而且是写作技巧的最好应用。一起来看习作《How to Be a Good Student》。

We students are the builders and masters of the country. It is important for us to know how to be a good student.

Firstly, a good student should be diligent in his studies. The more he studies, the more he will increase his knowledge. Without enough knowledge, we cannot make contributions to our country.

To take care of one's own body is another important thing for a good student to do. Anyone who doesn’t have a strong body can do nothing for his country, even if he has much knowledge. If someone studies hard but neglects his health, he will have no energy to make progress and probably die of poor health. From this we can see that to have a strong body is quite important to a

student.

Lastly, to cultivate one's own virtue is most important. Virtue is the essence of a noble and good character. It will greatly help one to serve his country heart and soul.

[赏析]

1.文章结构清晰，行文流畅。每段的第一句是段落主题句，其余句子都围绕它展开;句子间的过渡也很自然。

2.使用恰当的衔接语，使文章结构紧凑，如 firstly, another important thing, lastly 等。

3.运用高级词语，凸显了深厚的语言功底，如 make contributions to(为...做贡献), heart and soul(全心全意地)等。

4.运用高级句法结构，如 the more..., the more...结构、不定式短语作主语等。