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考研冲刺高速路:英语写作范文之二

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Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:
1) Describe the drawing briefly,     2) deduce the purpose of the drawer.
3) Suggest your countermeasure.


It is shown in the picture that chimneys in cities cause a lot of pollution.
Large clouds of smoke from chimneys cover the sky and the air is nearly suffocating.

As is symbolically revealed in the picture, the situation of air pollution is worsening.
We can see clearly that coal burning has brought about great hazards to the city.

【第一段是论说文的图画描述段。】
第一句是图画的总体描述,概括了图画中的事物及环境。
*句子剖析:句子主干是It is shown that…,其中that引导的是主语从句。
第二句挖掘图画的细节,具体描述了图画中的场景:浓烟笼罩天空,空气污浊。
*句子剖析:该句为and连接的并列复合句,

第三句引出图画的寓意,即文章的主题。
*句子剖析:as引导非限制定语从句,句子主干为the situation…is worsening.
第四句是段落总结句,归纳出煤炭为燃料的烟囱是环境污染的主要原因。
*句子剖析:句子主干是we can see that…。That 引导see的宾语从句。
*bring about造成,带来

第三句引出图画的寓意,即文章的主题。句子剖析:引导非限制定语从句,句子主干为第四句是段落总结句,归纳出煤炭为燃料的烟囱是环境污染的主要原因。句子剖析:句子主干是。引导的宾语从句。造成,带来
Judging from the pictures, we can clearly infer that the drawer’s intention is to warn people of heavy pollution in the city.

For one thing, due to planning mistakes, factories were usually placed in center of cities, among residential and business districts and produced harmful smoke which contains poisonous gases.
For another, the number of such chimneys has a lot to do with air pollution: nearly every block has several chimneys for the heating system, which makes the whole city immersed in thick smoke.
As a result, respiratory diseases have been reported to be rising and old people dying of the worsening air pollution.

【第二段是论说文的意义阐释段。】
第一句是全段的主题句,揭示了绘画人的创作意图:警示人们城市污染
*句子剖析:Judging…是现在分词做方式状语,句子的主干是we can infer that…,that 引导infer的宾语从句。
*warn… of…警告…
第二句指出其中一个症结所在:工厂位置的安排不当。
*句子剖析:due to…是原因状语;句子的主干是factories were placed… and produced…,并列谓语前一个是被动式,后面一个是主动式;which引导smoke的定语从句。
第三句指出另外一个症结:烟囱。
*nearly every block…是对于前面语句的解释,which是前面整句话的非限制向定语从句。
* have a lot to do with…与…有很大的关系

第四句回应本段第一句,总结城市污染造成的后果。
*句子剖析:这是一个由and连接的并列复合句。
*die of 死于…

第四句回应本段第一句,总结城市污染造成的后果。句子剖析:这是一个由连接的并列复合句。死于


第四句回应本段第一句,总结城市污染造成的后果。句子剖析:这是一个由连接的并列复合句。死于

In order to improve the situation, we have to take positive measures.
For one thing, factories with chimneys should be moved out of the center of the city and it should be made sure the waste gases are at least not poisonous.
For another, other means of heating should be developed to stop using coal.
Only in this way, can we find a way out and could people be happier and healthier.

【第三段是论说文的方法建议段。】
第一句是过渡句,引出下面的建议措施。
*take a measure采取措施
第二句提出第一项建议。
*句子剖析:本句是由and连接的并列复合句。在并列句的后半句,the waste gases are…是省略了that的主语从句。
*move out of搬出;

第三句提出第二项建议。
*stop doing…
第四句是本段的总结句,提出建议措施的必要性。
*句子剖析:Only表示“只有”在句首,后面的主句主谓倒装。

第三句提出第二项建议。第四句是本段的总结句,提出建议措施的必要性。句子剖析:表示“只有”在句首,后面的主句主谓倒装。

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