发布时间: 2017年06月20日
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Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting possible solutions
Dear Sir, |
称呼:写作关系不亲密的个人 |
As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory. |
第一段只有一句话,包含了2层信息:自我介绍以及写信目的。 (积累:It is my obligation to do…; make some suggestions concerning…) |
1) the heating system is in need of improvement—it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter; 2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner –there lacks a shelf to place books. |
第二段是提出建议及改进措施段。 第一句肯定所述对象的优点,为后面的改进意见做铺垫。 (积累:generally speaking, situate in…; well-equipped) 第二句是一个过渡句,转折到写信的根本目的上:提建议。建议共分2条,通过序号列出。 第三句提出第一条建议:改进供暖系统。 (积累:in need of; fail to do…)
(in a practical manner) |
I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards. |
第三段只有一句话,对信件进行总结,表达了期待得到解决的真诚态度。 (I would be more than happy if…;take place ) |
Yours sincerely, Li Ming |
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