托福口语真题答案老师点评(7)

【托福口语真题答案老师点评(7)】在托福备考过程中，考生最为关心的是，托福口语怎么练的问题。本文中新东方在线托福网为大家带来托福口语答案及对应的老师点评。通过针对性的口语点评，发现自己的缺点，大家才能更快地提高口语水平！

托福口语真题答案范例：

Sample response 2 P325

The man thinks that the university decision is wrong. According to his opinion, the bus　shouldn’t be eliminated. It create a lot of job. And he thinks basically the bus rout should be　changed. Due to due to the existing bus roup, many students can’t average to afford the bus.　And the overcrowded parking lot is added problem, which is also due to the uh not writing　uh university bus. If the students hasn’t a car, and if they cannot afor cannot afford the bus　then few student drive a car and obviously overcrowd the parking lot. But is better to meet　the change of the bus roup and um most of student should use the bus… (120words)

托福口语真题答案老师点评：

Rater’s Comments:

1. The speaker’s first language moderately influences her pronunciation, intonation,　and pacing. This creates some listener effort.

考生的母语在某种程度上影响了其发音，语调和语速

2. She provides content that is relevant to the task, but her limitations in language use　hinder her ability to accurately convey relevant details.

她提及了相关内容，但她较弱的语言运用能力妨碍了她准确地转述相关细节。

3. She fills the entire time with understandable speech.

她在一分钟内持续说完了她基ᴀ上能被理解的答案

4. However, she incorrectly repeats throughout the response time that students cannot　afford to ride the bus. She also says that few students will drive cars and overcrowd　the parking lots. This creates confusion for the listener. The speaker never mentions　the man’s concern about increase noise and traffic on campus.

然而，她在整个一分钟内重复，错误地说“学生们坐不起车”。她还说“只有少　数学生会开私家车，并使得停车场变得拥挤”。这会让者困惑。关于“男生对校园里的噪音和交通拥堵会增加的焦虑”她只字提。

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